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I am the sadness that evokes ones cries
I am the malice behind ones lies

I am the happiness that one comes to greet
I make you feel like dirt beneath your feet

I create illusions both far and wide
I am the calmness from watching the tide

I am the envy, triggered by whom I hold dear
I am not the freefall, but I am the fear

I am the nervous butterflies, fluttering through your chest
I am the dread you have before a test

I am the excitement of a new found friend
Yet I'm the regret when it comes to an end

I am love and I am devotion
Happy or sad I'm your emotion

And whether you like it or not, you're put to the test
But don't feel so bad. You're just like the rest.
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Yea...so I answer the question at the end of the poem. lol
This was written after a very emotional day. lol Sleep deprivation really affects you. Who knew? XD

I know that I posted like a gazzilion things recently but I finally got time to post them so I just decided that it's now or never. lol

Anyway, I hope you all like it! Thanks for all the support from all of my other work! :hug: :glomp: :hug: :glomp:

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:iconchristoflehmann:
NIce work, based on a very universal concept which usually is based on representations rather than causes.
I really love the fact that you have cut through all the antichrist, angels and demons sharades and got straight to the point

I am your emotion... Great concept and really well thought..

I particularly find the following stanza very powerful.

" I am not the freefasll, but I am the fear....

Great. A clear favorite for thids one.
My only point of critique is, that I know you can do better with the rythm and flow of the words.

Christof Lehmann

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:iconlifesizefairy:
Ah emotions... great poem :)

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"We are inclined to believe those whom we do not know because they have never deceived us."
~Samuel Johnson
:iconbellaezrebetfang:
Thank you!
Yes, I knew the rythm did feel out of place some how.
I will definitely look back on it. :)

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"God, we're off the rails,
now they drag me off in pieces." - elle-sophicles
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"I will make pilgrims of my fingers,"
- ScarlettLetters :iconscarlettletters:
:iconbellaezrebetfang:
Thank you. :) :hug:

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"God, we're off the rails,
now they drag me off in pieces." - elle-sophicles
[link]

"I will make pilgrims of my fingers,"
- ScarlettLetters :iconscarlettletters:
:iconmakgirl1234567:
This is a great work of art. It sounds like god the deamon......very evil. I love it.

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Someone will walk into your life and make you realize why it never worked out with anyone else. <3
:iconbellaezrebetfang:
Thanks. Muahahahaha. lol

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"God, we're off the rails,
now they drag me off in pieces." - elle-sophicles
[link]

"I will make pilgrims of my fingers,"
- ScarlettLetters :iconscarlettletters:
:iconhalfmaskedmaiden:
i like it. although when you said test twice i thought bout that and it kinda pulled me out of the poem some.. but beside that good stuff :)

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~x-ribbon
she paints her lips red and//tap dances across black tarred roads//with an idea in her mind that this is//what beautiful feels like

`Rushy
I found your letter //...

=Spamuel
My world is//Simpler, //...
:iconx-ribbon:
Its amazing every line i read i felt the emotion, my chest welled up with butterflies, my stomach lurched with dread, my heart skipped a beat with love.

You are my emotion. <3 Great work!!
:iconbellaezrebetfang:
yea, I didn't like the "test" thing either. I feel kind of out of it recently. It's like I'm going through major writers block. lol Hmmmm, I might look it over. It kindof threw me off a bit just writing it.

--
"God, we're off the rails,
now they drag me off in pieces." - elle-sophicles
[link]

"I will make pilgrims of my fingers,"
- ScarlettLetters :iconscarlettletters:

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