I am the sadness that evokes ones cries
I am the malice behind ones lies
I am the happiness that one comes to greet
I make you feel like dirt beneath your feet
I create illusions both far and wide
I am the calmness from watching the tide
I am the envy, triggered by whom I hold dear
I am not the freefall, but I am the fear
I am the nervous butterflies, fluttering through your chest
I am the dread you have before a test
I am the excitement of a new found friend
Yet I'm the regret when it comes to an end
I am love and I am devotion
Happy or sad I'm your emotion
And whether you like it or not, you're put to the test
But don't feel so bad. You're just like the rest.















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I really love the fact that you have cut through all the antichrist, angels and demons sharades and got straight to the point
I am your emotion... Great concept and really well thought..
I particularly find the following stanza very powerful.
" I am not the freefasll, but I am the fear....
Great. A clear favorite for thids one.
My only point of critique is, that I know you can do better with the rythm and flow of the words.
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Yes, I knew the rythm did feel out of place some how.
I will definitely look back on it.
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"God, we're off the rails,
now they drag me off in pieces." - elle-sophicles
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"I will make pilgrims of my fingers,"
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Someone will walk into your life and make you realize why it never worked out with anyone else. <3
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she paints her lips red and//tap dances across black tarred roads//with an idea in her mind that this is//what beautiful feels like
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I found your letter //...
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My world is//Simpler, //...
You are my emotion. <3 Great work!!
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