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There’s a weeping pickpocket
Rocking out to scorching tunes
See-through swooning these blue moons
Tucked inside this tricky locket

There’s a reason this dove cries
This heart folds
This love lies
Meet me, crave me, tantalize

Swept along a ringing mile
It’s no light, it’s just a guile
It’s not guile it’s just a rune
Break it, feed it, leave me room

Let’s escape, let’s escape
Quick! refurnish, paint, create
Stopping time in all its poses
Scream, it’s all these raw-plucked roses

Raw-plucked roses, worn out tools
Scraped across the ground of souls

Ground of souls, revengeful tries
What happens through tempered skies?
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i am jealous of your rhyming capabilities
:iconcrystil-princess:
That is SO badass :worship:

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Anyone who thinks sunshine is happiness, has never danced in the rain........
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How you used to be able to talk for hours and how now you can barely look at them.......Its sad how times have changed.....
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hmm....i like it

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When all of my world came crashing down,
That was the moment I really knew how to frown.
:icontimlasure:
This has almost a Shakespearean feel to it :D

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What if there were no hypothetical questions?
:iconbellaezrebetfang:
:giggle: thank you. ^^

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"God, we're off the rails,
now they drag me off in pieces." - elle-sophicles
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"I will make pilgrims of my fingers,"
- ScarlettLetters :iconscarlettletters:
:iconbellaezrebetfang:
Don't be jealous. It's not good for the complexion. :giggle:
You have some amazing skill too. You paint a story with your words, something I haven't been able to accomplish.

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"God, we're off the rails,
now they drag me off in pieces." - elle-sophicles
[link]

"I will make pilgrims of my fingers,"
- ScarlettLetters :iconscarlettletters:
:iconbellaezrebetfang:
are you sure? You seem quite tentative on this comment? :giggle:

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"God, we're off the rails,
now they drag me off in pieces." - elle-sophicles
[link]

"I will make pilgrims of my fingers,"
- ScarlettLetters :iconscarlettletters:
:iconcrystil-princess:
Chur welcome ^^

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Anyone who thinks sunshine is happiness, has never danced in the rain........
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How you used to be able to talk for hours and how now you can barely look at them.......Its sad how times have changed.....
:iconrugthug:
really? well i really DO like it :P

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When all of my world came crashing down,
That was the moment I really knew how to frown.
:iconx-ribbon:
lol, oh believe me, you are way talented beyond words.
everything you write is either cryptic or honest beauty. uh-mazing!

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