Three nights of crystalizing silence
Pace
Peace
Since the wind blows, there's not been a time
I will step into the sunlight
Beady eyes bring dreadful forthcoming
No twitter of feet
Beneath the brush
My soft
My soothed
Crowning deliquence, abiding crime
Knuckles of leaves
Cracking in correspondence
L
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oms o r
Twisted mortal sin
Contershading candlelight
Soft
Lo! beware fore stillness nears
Lies beneath a candy shop
Care to come in for a treat?














Comments
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"A man's home is his coffin" - Al Bundy
I must say as I was writing, I wasn't quite sure of the next line either. O_O
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"God, we're off the rails,
now they drag me off in pieces." - elle-sophicles
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"I will make pilgrims of my fingers,"
- ScarlettLetters :iconscarlettletters:
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"A man's home is his coffin" - Al Bundy
L
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oms o r
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Don't blame me.
I'm just here for the cookies.
IT didn't C & P right but I stil love the way you did those 2 words.
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Don't blame me.
I'm just here for the cookies.
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If God isn't dead, then I'll kill him myself.
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There is only one place you can go to avoid God.
Hell.
I adore the word play in a couple spots and I love the mix up of letters. It causes you to compare and contrast and for the reader to engage in reading.
The imagery of sound (if that makes sense) was almost a feeling (if that makes even less sense). The soft sharpness (if that makes the least sense of all) was very dominant.
Awesome.
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